Walking down to Pt England beach, I felt excited. But then started wondering, "What I should do first?" When we got there everyone had to wait for Mr. Burt to tell us where. The first thing I did was eat my lunch.
After eating a whole lot of food Jorja, Levi and I wondered off wanting to do something exciting. As we were walking, Mr. Barks called us and asked if we wanted to learn how to fly a kite, we all said YES. First it was Levi. When I got the chance to fly the kite it felt like I was going to be pulled up into the air. It was scary but at the same time fun.
My favourite thing that day was playing ball tiggy with Jorja, Tyla, Gloria, Kaycee and Neo. Even though it didn't even last 10 minutes, it was still fun. It was fun because you can get tagged easily and there was heaps of action.
At the end of the day I felt really tired but happy that mostly everyone got along. I am really looking forward for next years picnic.
Hello and I liked this story when you guys were going for a trip to the beach. What I like about this story is when you write when you had a picnic at the beach. Maybe next time you should make more paragraph and more words what happened in the picnic.HAHAHAHAHA see you next time. Great Work :)
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